Hi Fiapo, I really liked how you wrote this from the bottom of your heart and how evident it shows in your prayer. I think you should re-read your prayer and correct some incorrect punctuation. Other than that, I think your prayer was very interesting and thought out well.
Hi Fiapo,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you wrote this from the bottom of your heart and how evident it shows in your prayer. I think you should re-read your prayer and correct some incorrect punctuation. Other than that, I think your prayer was very interesting and thought out well.
Good Job!