Narrative Writing

2.08.19
I am learning to write a narrative story and include simile , metaphor or personification.

Love

He feels nothing but pain in his heart as the cold wind whistles it’s way around him.
He thinks nobody loves him. He doesn’t think he is good enough for anyone.
He just sits there thinking silently.

The ocean growls as the big waves splash onto the shore from afar.
He gets up on both feet standing up high on the low brick wall. His legs shake of fear ,
he looks down to see the ocean far away from where he is. 

Suddenly he heard loud voices , worried voices , he looked back &
saw shadows getting closer & bigger. He took a step back, not saying anything
he shut his eyes , stretched his arms out then fell back. He then felt something
grip onto his left hand. He looked up and saw his mother struggling to pull him ,
her tears dripped onto him , then his little sister grabbed his right hand.

 They pulled him up back onto the ground.
His mother fell onto the ground then grabbed him ,
wrapped her arms around him then squeezed him firmly not letting him go.
He started to ball his eyes out realizing what trouble he had made.
He grabbed his little sister and hugged her.
Then heard the words he always wanted to hear.
“We love you!” , a waterfall sprung down from his face. He cried out “I love you too!”